Personal Narritive Reading resonse

     Currently in English class we are writing personal narratives (Whoooohooo!!!). My narrative is about developing my work ethic and how I did it. If you read my narrative you can definitely tell I was brave for working in the Louisiana heat and yeah brave. I tried to put focus on describing the big and little things, I thought this would help me. For example I described the tractor I worked on, and I gave y'all all the possible detail I could on it. At first my narrative was just kind of an overview of the summers where I developed my work ethic. Then I went back and edited it and now it is one specific scenario. this was kind of hard, because I couldn't think of a specific scenario, so I basically summed up what I did every day and just put them in order in the way they happened. Ever since I put the specific scenario in, my narrative seems less organized.